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 title: Call for Papers
 date: 2003-05-17 00:00:00 
-updated: 2015-02-14 18:40:48 
+updated: 2015-02-14 18:43:15 
 author: webmaster
-tags: update, camp
+tags: update, cfp, camp
 
 Chaos Communication Camp 2003
 
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ regard as important for the near future. These are:
 -   Open Source Security (code audits and "who reads the open source
     anyway?")
 -   instant messaging
--   surveillance, wiretapping and crowd controll: state of the art
+-   surveillance, wiretapping and crowd control: state of the art
 -   reengineering hands-on workshops and publication standards
 -   using print-on-demand-technology to improve the availability of
     interesting content
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ regard as important for the near future. These are:
  
 
 -   over-analysis of the world and the resulting problems,
-    interdepencies and next-order complexities
+    interdependencies and next-order complexities
 -   power-politics and the economic roots of today's bizarre world
 -   military vs. civilian R&D and the resulting moral problems
 -   truth, trust, perception-management and propaganda
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ regard as important for the near future. These are:
 -   poetry, performances, music, DJs, optics, paintings, sculptures
 -   movies, flash-films, animations and demo-competitions
 -   there will be a camp radio station (both local broadcast and
-    internet streaming) that is looking for content, especialy radio
+    internet streaming) that is looking for content, especially radio
     drama and documentary
 
  
@@ -88,15 +88,14 @@ darn funny. Sales droids have been known to disappear without traces on
 past events. Interactive workshops welcome. Hands-On anything even more
 welcome.
 
-Abstracts and papers should be submitted in
-English [](https://mce_host/de/nodes/140/content@camp.ccc.de)as soon as
-possible, latest on 1st July 2003 17:00 GMT. There will be a very
-limited number of slots reserved for presentations covering stuff that
-happens between the submission deadline and the start of the Camp, but
-we will be extremely discriminate regarding the allocation of these
-slots. The submission should inlcude references and URLs, a short
-biography of the speaker, contact information (e-mail) and any time
-constrains or preferences the speaker might have.
+Abstracts and papers should be submitted in English as soon as possible,
+latest on 1st July 2003 17:00 GMT. There will be a very limited number
+of slots reserved for presentations covering stuff that happens between
+the submission deadline and the start of the Camp, but we will be
+extremely discriminate regarding the allocation of these slots. The
+submission should include references and URLs, a short biography of the
+speaker, contact information (e-mail) and any time constrains or
+preferences the speaker might have.
 
 Notice of acceptance will be sent out as soon as possible. Final
 presentations should be in English and be up to 60 or up to 120 minutes
@@ -114,5 +113,5 @@ accommodation.
 The preliminary agenda will be published on the web in the near future.
 Registration information will be posted, too.
 
-Attractive timeslots in the agenda might get filled up before 1st of
+Attractive time-slots in the agenda might get filled up before 1st of
 July, so please, don't wait too long for your submission.