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 title: Chaos Computer Club analyzes new German government spyware
 date: 2011-10-26 11:00:00 
-updated: 2011-10-30 00:13:16 
+updated: 2011-10-31 16:33:59 
 author: presse
-tags: update, pressemitteilung, staatstrojaner
+tags: update, pressemitteilung, staatstrojaner, 0zapftis
 previewimage: /images/0zapftisdiffed_1.png
 
-The Chaos Computer Club (CCC) has recently received a newer version of the "Staatstrojaner", a government spyware. The comparison with the older version, already analyzed by the CCC with the actual Sniffer-code from December 2010, revealed new evidence. Despite the claims of the responsible parties, the trojan can still be captured, loaded with any code and also the allegedly "audit trail" can be manipulated. The CCC is calling for a complete waiver of Trojans in pre-trial applications.
+The Chaos Computer Club (CCC) has recently received a newer version of the "Staatstrojaner", a government spyware. The comparison with the older version, already analyzed by the CCC with the actual Sniffer-code from December 2010, revealed new evidence. Despite the claims of the responsible parties, the Trojan can still be remote-controlled, loaded with any code and also the allegedly "revision-proof logging" can be manipulated. The CCC is calling for a complete waiver of Trojans in pre-trial investigations.
 
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@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ officially called computer infiltrations, trivially called
 "source-telecommunication surveillance". Its application in pre-trials
 and law enforcement meanwhile was admitted by many states.
 
-Despite the CCC has published solid technical evidence, the authorities
+Although the CCC has published solid technical evidence, the authorities
 responsible for internal affairs, as well as the manufacturer DigiTask,
 denied the existence of any illegal functionalities \[1\],\[2\],\[10\],
 and pleaded that the analyzed Trojan was allegedly an outdated software
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ violation is relative in any way. It serves a purpose, and therefore the
 aim justifies the means.
 
 Therefore, the CCC now presents a more detailed technical documentation
-of a newer version of the "Staatstrojaner" from the year 2010.\[3\] The
+of a newer version of the "Staatstrojaner" from the year 2010. \[3\] The
 testimony of DigiTask \[10\] is the basis of a detailed report that
 serves as a euphemistic attempt to conceal its illegal nature. At the
 same time, both disassembled versions of the Trojan, commented by the
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@ the findings and to facilitate further research by interested parties.
 were clearly not capable of developing a "Staatstrojaner" which would
 meet the minimum of requirements for juridical evidence, basic law
 compliance and security against manipulation”, a CCC spokesperson summed
-up about the new findings. “By these concrete and principal reasons, it
-is logical not to expected that this would succeed in the future."
+up the new findings. “By these concrete and principal reasons, it is
+logical not to expect that this would succeed in the future."
 
 The diagnosis of the new CCC report presents a strong contrast to the
 claims by the Interior Secretary Ole Schröder, who was the one who