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 title: The Chaos Computer Club is alarmed by recent internationallly coordinated attacks on human rights.
 date: 2019-04-15 19:15:08 
-updated: 2019-04-16 13:00:33 
+updated: 2019-04-16 13:05:45 
 author: linus
 tags: update, pressemitteilung
 
@@ -11,13 +11,13 @@ The recent arrests of prominent whistleblowers and press freedom activists, Chel
 
 For more than a month now, CCC's honorary member ***Chelsea Manning***
 has been detained in order to press her to testify before a Grand Jury.
-Chelsea Manning has served seven years in military prison before she was
-pardoned by President Barack Obama. She is now trying to move on with
-her life without further harassment.
+Chelsea Manning has served seven years in military prison before she her
+sentence was commuted by President Barack Obama. She is now trying to
+move on with her life without further harassment.
 
 Wikileaks ex-director ***Julian Assange*** was evicted from the
 Ecuadorian embassy in a coordinated move to extradite him to the United
-States. In the U.S., he is charged with – unsucessfully – offering
+States. In the U.S. he is charged with – unsucessfully – offering
 support to Chelsea Manning in accessing computer files. It is obvious
 that this indictment does not reflect the full extent of charges the
 U.S. will press against Assange in case of a successful extradition.
@@ -27,22 +27,22 @@ Ecuadorian police. Initially, [his attorneys were denied access to him,
 were not allowed to talk to him nor see
 him](https://goatsing.wordpress.com/2019/04/13/press-release-on-the-detention-of-ola-bini-2/).
 His house was raided and several devices were confiscated. Bini was held
-captive for 2 days, before the Ecuadorian government anounced he was
-held for "alleged participation in the crime of assault on the integrity
-of computer systems." Apparently, the Ecuadorian government plans to
-intimidate and damage Ola in retaliation for recent publications
-exposing corruption within the Ecuadorian government.
+captive for two days, before the Ecuadorian government announced that he
+was held for "alleged participation in the crime of assault on the
+integrity of computer systems." Apparently, the Ecuadorian government
+plans to intimidate and damage Ola in retaliation for recent
+publications exposing corruption within the Ecuadorian government.
 
 We condemn these concerted attacks on journalists, whistleblowers and
-their supporters for what they are: Shocking and coordinated violations
+their supporters for what they are: shocking and coordinated violations
 of human rights and the freedom of press.
 
 The Chaos Computer Club demands
 
--   the immediate release of Chelsea Manning
--   the immediate release of Ola Bini
+-   the immediate release of Chelsea Manning,
+-   the immediate release of Ola Bini, and
 -   an immediate stop of any plans to extradite Julian Assange to the
-    U.S., where he would not face fair trial
+    U.S., where he would not face fair trial.
 
 We call for citizens, journalists and European governments to stand in
 solidarity.