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-title: Chaostreff Dresden: Symposium "DataTracks - Privacy was Yesterday"
+title: Chaostreff Dresden: Symposium "DataTracks – Privacy was Yesterday"
 date: 2004-05-05 00:00:00 
-updated: 2009-04-18 19:12:41 
+updated: 2009-12-13 22:59:26 
 author: webmaster
-tags: update
+tags: update, privacy
 
-
-The Chaostreff Dresden, a local group of the CCC, organizes a one-day 
-Symposium on the subject of data protection and self-determined use
-of personal information. 
-You are invited to get to know the other side of a coin each
-one of us has been using and which we can't evade anymore. Learn
-more about the technology and methods of surveillance, the
-impact this will have on our society and how to protect against it.
+The Chaostreff Dresden, a local group of the CCC, organizes a one-day symposium on the subject of data protection and self-determined use of personal information. You are invited to get to know the other side of a coin each one of us has been using and which we can't evade anymore. Learn more about the technology and methods of surveillance, the impact this will have on our society and how to protect against it.

  
 
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 When: May 8, 2004, 10am - 7pm (+ Aftershow)\
-Where: Medienkulturzentrum Pentacon, Schandauer Str.64, Dresden\
-Web: [](http://datenspuren.c3d2.de)\
-
-As usual, we welcome every individual able to think independently.
+Where: Medienkulturzentrum Pentacon, Schandauer Str. 64, Dresden
 
-There will be no entrance fee.
+As usual, we welcome every individual able to think independently. There
+will be no entrance fee.
 
 Below is a list of speeches that will take place, amongst others:\
 (Please note: Almost all speeches will be held in German language!)
 
-Prof. Dr. Pfitzmann (TU Dresden): Keynote - History, Present and Future
+Prof. Dr. Pfitzmann (TU Dresden): Keynote – History, Present and Future
 of Data Protection\
 Bettina Jodda (Twister): Nothing to Hide!?\
 Frank Rosengart: Behind the cameras of the toll collect system\
 Lutz Donnerhacke: E-Mail-Remailer / Mix / Web-Mailer\
 Rüdiger Weis: Trusted Computing (TCPA/TCG)\
-Jaya Baloo: Lawful Interception\
+Jaya Baloo: Lawful Interception
 
 At the end of the symposium, a panel discussion will take place on the
 subject of "Do I have anything to hide?"\
@@ -42,8 +33,7 @@ Participants: Prof. Pfitzmann, Twister, Dietmar Möws and others
 
 Moreover, there will be several workshops as well as a keysigning party.
 
-More detailled information can be found at
-[](http://datenspuren.c3d2.de)\
+\
 Mailcontact: mail\@c3d2.de
 
 We would be glad to welcome you!